Monday 10 March 2014

5 sentence challenge




Autumn is here . I could taste the salt water. It felt like a wasps sting. I burnt my finger . My bones were burnt.
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  1. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 14:04

    Nice writing Jacob!!! From Mitchell. next time try more harder at more wow words.

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  2. Anonymous14 April 2014 at 16:58

    I like your story but used same more wow word from kel

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